My writing goal so far this term has been to paint a picture in the reader's head and write a strong, descriptive piece of writing with complex Language features
Here is a piece of writing about the rain.
How do you think I’m going with my goal.
It was a sunny day in Auckland, but also an unpredictable day. Then it started. The rain began to fall from the dark gloomy sky. The rain fell making puddles along the road the road side. It made me feel sad and hollow inside. The rain hit my sensitive skin with a thrash
